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TITLE: The Eyes of My Father -Final Draft -- January 2, 2019
By Linda Delgado
11/29/18
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Thank you for all your help!
As I look into my Father's eyes,
I am absorbed by His presence.

He can see all that I am,
Within His very essence.

His eyes reveal so much to me,
while we are standing face-to-face.

His unconditional love for me
and His amazing grace.

The mercy that He's shown to me,
Has been so evident in my life.

I am pushing forward daily,
Towards my goal,
Walking through the strife.

How can I lose focus
On His destiny for me?

For when that day finally comes,
His perfection I will be!
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