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TITLE: The Invitation - Final Draft -- January 7, 2019
By Linda Delgado
11/10/18
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This is the first time I have posted anything on Faithwriters. I've been in three writing challenges. I can take whatever you think is necessary. Please be completely honest. I am here to grow, as a writer and won't be able to do that unless you are giving me your honest input. Thank you for all your comments, good and bad, ahead of time,
THE INVITATION

I'm just traveling through this world, but never alone.

Someone is always with me wherever I go.

My walk with Him is rooted in faith, hope and trust, but most of all, His unconditional love.

Peace that surpasses all understanding, is given only by Him. For He is my Savior, my Mentor, my Friend.

His name is Jesus. You can know Him, too.

For right now, He is waiting, He is waiting for you.

Please, don't hesitate, don't put it off! For if you do wait, your soul could be lost.

He knows your heart has been broken, in so many ways.

Only Jesus can mend it, if you'll let Him today.

So, come to Him, come to Him, come to Him now!

You never will know, when His trumpet will sound!

--- Linda Delgado
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