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TITLE: Selling of A Soul
By bo Jennings
11/16/13
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The Imaginations, unreachable desires
Come rescue me from the memories of fire

Serve the humbled servant caviar
Soon drinking from a brass elegant samovar

And tasting only the royals finest
Then, knowing just like a highness

Turning blue, the blood that's red
How gladly, leaving my life of dread

Three thousand threads delicately woven
Ah, softness; then the seduction

Costing merely...only a soul
Sold! Wearing, the black lacy camisole

Laying down innocent purity
Sadly, taken rather brusquely

Vanity and ego opened the door
There, lay the vulnerable on the floor.
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