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TITLE: You took my Place. 12 May 2013
By Elisabeth Puruto
05/12/13
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A poem of contemplation during Easter Week
You took my Place

Stretched out,
helpless,
You cannot move your arms
You cannot move your legs
Thorns in the back of your neck
You cannot move!

Sun burning your naked body
Tears, sweat and blood run down your face
You cannot move!

Your throat is parched
Your tongue swollen
Your breathing painful
You cannot move!

You are ridiculed
You are hated
You are innocent

You took my place on the cross!

E. Puruto
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