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TITLE: Lightened load
By Wesley Hesketh
02/08/12
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I wrote this for the people that don't know God and all He is. It is also a call for those that have wander off.
God can make your load light
He sees you everywhere.
He is your companion
All you life He’ll share.

But you must look for Him
In all you say and do.
His angels will protect you
From the fire you walk through.

The Holy Ghost is with us
To help us understand.
All the things God has for us
And His mighty plan.

Then there’s precious Jesus
Through all our sinful life.
He was there to take our place
He saved us from our strife.

Oh my heavenly Father
You know my every word.
You can also see my heart
All my prayers You’ve heard.

You are my creator
Made all that is around.
You made the heavens and the Earth
Then pulled me from the ground.

Because You are Almighty
You come to us in parts.
If you put it all together
You’ll see His tender heart.

God always is the answer
That, He will freely give.
You just have to ask Him
Let Him help you live.
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