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TITLE: When you look to the Lord
By julie clark
01/29/12
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i was singing trust and obey for there's and found myself writing new words to the rythem i get lost sometimes where i am in the tune
When you follow his will
And you trust in his word
He will bring to you all that you need
Only take his strong hand
He will carry you through
He will ever be there by your side

He is guiding you through
All the dangers and woes
Till you come to the end of the day
Only he is the way
In this world full of pain
Let him take all your burdens away

Lay them all by the cross
All your hopes and your fear
Then surrender your will there and then
To the master above
Then just watch as the pain melts away
Yes your burden is light
When its seen through Gods eyes
When you rest in the knowledge of him

So believe in his word
And with the spirit be blessed
With his light without fear
And repentance will come bright and true
When we see the great truth
You will fall at his feet
And his life he will give you anew

He will change you inside
To the child he can see
But There's only one way to receive

And that's is always to trust and obey
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