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TITLE: With This Your Life
By wendell a brown
08/02/11
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Many do not think about the consequences of what they say and do in their lives. This is a message for them!
What will you do with this your life
That the Lord did make come to be
What would you do with the moments
As they pass you by each day and flee

For as you grow there will be choices made
That will affect your life with all you do
And after making these many choices
There will be some you will wish to undo

For each step is a building block with four sides
That until attempted you’ll not know the outcome
But if you do not make the right choices in life
You may find your world will become undone

You must base your life on a strong foundation
On a solid rock that your feet may fearlessly stand
And with that choice will come sweet wisdom
That will help you each day to better understand

That no matter how large in life you become
So hard one day could be your fall
For there is One more powerful than you
Who at a word can cause you to lose it all

Choose carefully the steps that you makes each day
Joining Him Each morning while opening the spiritual door
For if you seek the wisdom that is needed for your life
Then His love and guidance you will need for sure.
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