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TITLE: The Sweetness Of My Life
By wendell a brown
05/26/11
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A poem that when I thought of my wife, I wrote it for God. And after I read it i Saw it could be for my wife. The Triangle of God the Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit is all inclusive. So there is another triangle for christian couple, God at the top and His arms reaching down each side of the triangle to the couple that married in Christ and they embrace at the bottom of the triangle
You are the sweetness of my life
The radiance of my smile
You are the wholesome love I need
Who makes my life so worthwhile

And when You are so close to me
Only You can make my heart feel
Like I did when I first met You
When my life became so ideal

No moments have ever gone by
in our past that i can trace
Where I did not love You everyday
In so many different ways

For You are the sunshine in my life
Also the happiness I will always need
And my life would be so very crippling
Without Your sweet love a part of me.


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