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TITLE: It's Better Than...
By MELISSA HENDREN
06/03/09
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It’s better than your Great Aunt’s House, On Christmas Eve,
The smell of Turkey wafting through the air,
It’s better than Old Time Movies, On Saturday, Curled up on the Couch, Not even brushing your hair.
It’s better than a warm cup of cocoa, By a fireplace, As the snow falls hypnotically down,
It’s better than cold drinks and hot wings, On Super Bowl Sunday,
Even if your team, Has scored a touchdown.
It’s better than 18 holes of golf, On a perfect spring day,
Even if, Your games under par,
It’s better than picking up your sweetie, For a romantic date,
In your shiny, recently washed car.
It’s better than warm apple pie, Cooling in the kitchen,
That your Mother has made you with love,
It’s better than reaching under your bed, And grabbing your joggers, And finding that lost winter glove.
It’s walking in this church, And sitting in that pew,
And learning of His Glory and Powers,
It’s being forgiven for my past, And being blessed in the present,
And knowing the choice, For the future is ours.
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