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TITLE: Eden
By William Hynd
06/01/09
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Eden

By chance we found the gates of Eden;
Crossed the threshold of Heaven
On Earth without any plan in mind.
Multiple Edens reflecting Joseph colours
On glassy living waters amazing us
By reds greens and blues tangled
With chromatic magnificence. We were fulfilled,
And sat there beside the ripples of Siloam
Healed. Heady heights high above to Heaven soared,
Our souls senses scenting honeysuckle and sap
Filling the cedars of Lebanon. We were rooted
By the ancient woodland oaks of Bashan: Gazing
Upwards we remember it-" I in you and you in me."
It is my love that you see.
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