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Sea of words

by Vickie Reece
01/07/09
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With a broken spirit and a contrite heart I stand by the sea of words,and as I knelt to cast a stone; my pass I couldn't let go. until a word washed by my feet, with hands over my eye's I peeked, oh, how frighten I was when i saw: a small voice said "it's forgiveness that's all",picking up the word not laying it aside, the word prayer passed me by,taking a step into the sea, the word prayer took hold of me, I almost slipped lo and behold there goes the word fellowship. running to grasp it, another word called love came by with a zip,I swam taking hold of it. the water came with a churn! standing being steady and firm, I saw the word learn, this one I can bare, but behold the word share,putting them all in a line, I ate them one at a time.
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Joanne Sher 
26 Jan 2009
Vickie - I did send you the edit of this - this is the third time. Am I maybe going in your spam folder? Might want to check there.
Joanne Sher 
08 Jan 2009
Great imagery. A bit of spacing and clearer punctuation might make this read better. Enjoyed this!
Judy Wilson
08 Jan 2009
i think this is delightful, Man does not live by bread alone!
Lisa Walker Thomas
08 Jan 2009
I have to read more of your work, your gift is astounding and effortless at the same time. How precious you are to our Heavenly Father as He uses you as the the vessel to connect His words in such a awe inspiring way. You are beautifully gifted and I'm smiling because I know have no idea (pehaps) of the power you poessess to touch lives simply by playing with the beautiful library of words in your mind. Awesome, can't wait to read more, and more...

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