Poetry
The beautiful colors of the sea
Created by our God above
The oceans wave so blue
Bringing peace to my soul
The sounds of the water
Brings a calmness to my heart
The beauty and the sounds
Gives me a peaceful rest
The awsome power it has over me
As I stand and look over the water
Seeing God's love through His beauty
The pleasures He gives us to enjoy
If ever you had a doubt
That God is really real
Just take time to stand still
And look at His awesome work
05/13/02 © Laura L. Elam
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Hi Laura: Yes! you've shown it: the whole world shows the glory of God. It's a good poem. My only suggestion is that you don't use the word "beauty" or beautiful so much. Find other words. Also, the sea is used a lot to talk about God's awe. As such, it becomes a little too cliched after a while. I'd say to try to remember some other natural thing that really affected you by its beauty or creation and discuss that.
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