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African DeLight

by Douglas Sowers
09/23/07
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Fire’s crackling mixed with screams and shots. Breezes blew choking smoke over Irungu. While awaiting the secretive blanket of night and desperately fighting a cough, another hider succumbed. Footsteps responded stimulating someone’s panicky flight. A bullet screamed death. Powerful ancient dreams shatter another night. Praise God for saving me.

Ali opened his grimy eyes, seeing Isa still slumbering. The rusty trash bin disgorged Ali. Planning the day’s hustles, he discovered malaria had destroyed Musa. Shrugging, he practiced appearing deformed while Isa woke. Would his ten year old struggle end like Musa? Could Muslims take the missionary’s offer of schooling?

Wambui, glancing furtively, stuffed the stale loaf into her kanga. Bitterly mourning losing her malnourished family, she stubbornly ignored those sufferers who mercilessly denied her children’s pleas. Along with a baby’s cry, she hears, “Whoever gives a cup of water …” Weeping, she gathers the infant off the deceased mother.

Pastor Gitanga closed the rickety door. By fasting this week, he could purchase a mosquito net, saving the rest of the children. Gitanga would respond to his tummy’s screaming by praising God for the future joy lighting the family’s eyes. God lovingly replaced enough missed meals that he remained healthy.

George unloaded solar ovens while giraffes strolled through Mr Irungu’s garden. Four of the elders on the list had qualified for micro-businesses. All distributed tracts to customers. Praise God, finally he was ending poverty, growing congregations, and planting churches. Dead methods were eliminated but the mission board threatened firing him.

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darlene hight
27 Sep 2007
very descriptive writing. Thanks for the view

Darlene
Seema Bagai
27 Sep 2007
Intense, with emotion packed into a few words.
Linda Roth
26 Sep 2007
Doug, I can imagine you writing children's missionary stories! I wonder if you have done so.
Tammy Johnson
26 Sep 2007
EVERY word counted and it all flowed so well. Hard to believe they were only 50 words or less - they packed soooo much of a story!
Janice Cartwright
25 Sep 2007
Just amazing. All five involved me totally.
Allison Egley 
25 Sep 2007
Oh wow. These are so intense! You really crammed a lot into 50 words. I think the last one is my favorite.
dub W
24 Sep 2007
Wow, lots of description...put it all together into a manuscript.
Pat Guy
24 Sep 2007
Wow is right! What an emotional ride - awesome. Loved them all. Especially the mother one.
Laurie Walker
24 Sep 2007
MY GOODNESS you packed a lot of vividness into 50 words! Well done doesn't seem praise enough.
Joanne Sher 
24 Sep 2007
Excellent descriptions - and YES, I WAS transported. Third if my favorite.
Betty Castleberry
24 Sep 2007
These are excellent. You said so much in just a few words. I can't pick a favorite.
Verna Cole Mitchell 
24 Sep 2007
These shortsnaps with the vivid descriptions bring the mission field very close. You mastered this challenge.
Mo
24 Sep 2007
Yes, certainly a very vivid peak into another life.

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