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Jesus's Sacrifice

by Michelle Cartwright
05/18/06
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There is a file
Shiny and white,
With a life encoded
Of each day and night,
Displaying every word
Every thought is shown,
Safely locked away
Ashamed of what is known.

Then Jesus came
And looked at this life,
So filled with emotion
And in no time,
With his own blood
He rewrote my life,
By unconditional love
He displayed his sacrifice.

Copyright ©2004 Michelle Cartwright
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Greg Doyle
18 May 2006
I enjoyed both the message and testimonial aspects of this poem. My only suggestion is a slight correction in the title. Because the name "Jesus" ends in "s" the possessive form should be Jesus' Sacrifice.

Good write.
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