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Everything I've been called, now comes to be,
Why the odd look, remember your brutality?
Come on now you're right, can't you see,
All you once shouted, becomes reality.
You shouldn't be upset, I agree with you,
I'm a worthless good for nothing, only unto,
Life is filled with tragedy, what can I do?
It's been taught by a teacher, false and untrue.
Living in state of family, no where around,
You like it that way you cannot be found,
Where close attention paid to every detail,
Creates tiny loopholes, now mastered well,
Great strength admired, soon becomes frail,
I take heart and hear the Lord Almighty tell:
"You can't hide from me, I know who you are.
Knowing darkness, I'm light, seeing ALL this far!
When will you learn, I'm the weather and ground,
You're here thanks to me making your heart pound,
I can change it in an instant, but I have hope for you
Still have a little time, and much work to do."
NO! NO! NO! Now don't you get mad
If anything at all, you should be glad,
I'm not up in your face, making you sad
Like you did to me, now I'm ironclad.
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This is a beautiful piece. You did a wonderful job of placing your feelings on each line. I could totally relate. I know often poetry punctuation can be a stylistic choice, but since you used it, I might suggest you replace some of the commas with a semi-colons or period after the complete sentences and question marks after questions. At first, I wasn't sure if the you to whom you refer is Satan, the world, or someone in particular. Then I decided it didn't matter because each reader would be able to insert her own you. It takes a lot of talent to be able to make a poem so personal yet fitting for many people. You did a superb job in that regard. I especially felt when God spoke, he was speaking right to my heart. You have a passion that is palpable. God bless.
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