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On the quay I am alone

by Gert Strydom
07/20/14
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On the quay I am alone
while fishing-boats sail into the green sea,
I hide behind my sunglasses
and some boats skip over the breakers
before they reach the calmer water
of the deep ocean,

seagulls hang screaming against the wind
as if they are a part of it
and the sails of wind-surfers flutter
while anxious some try to stay on top
when the wind changes direction
and are jerking them suddenly.

On the beach on the opposite side
a girl screams
as if she is barely alarmed
while her boy-friend sprays water over her
and a few lovely women
peep from behind their sunglasses at me
and I see the sun baking
their golden bodies,

high up cape gannets fly almost up to heaven
and I follow the sun
that is drawing lower over the dome of the sky
and try to see further
than where earth draws its horizon

and wonder what God does see
in humanity
where billions of us
teem like small ants
and everyone does lead a life,
gets hurt and do dream dreams.

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Deborah Porter 
21 Jul 2014
Gert, I loved the picture you painted in this. There were a few places where the wording felt a tiny bit odd (such as the second stanza, "when the wind changes direction and are jerking them suddenly", I assumed you meant the sails were jerking them, but it didn't quite work because it sounded like the wind was jerking them). For the most part, though, the imagery in this was refreshing; natural and appealing. Also loved that last stanza. Tied things up so well. Look forward to reading more by you, and if you haven't already done so, hope you'll jump into the Writing Challenge. Blessings, Deb

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