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by Scotty B
08/03/04
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yesterday, today.
it all feels the same.
i find no resolution, noone to blame.
im trapped in a cycle, a neverending night.
when will i see the morning light?
I can not take it, i won't fight me again.
I behold what is up, and not within.

i can hear but dont listen
i look but i can not see.
i need more of you now, and less of me.
get me out of my way,
i want to be free.
i need more of you now, and less of me

the past in my face,
i can not see through this haze.
my thoughts, my dreams, my life spin around.
lead me out of this place and i wont back down
regret and failure, they bind my feet,
all that stands in my way is me.
give me your trust, i will give you my hand.
the world i have built is becoming like quicksand
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Lucian Thompson
03 Aug 2004
Gee...so sad. Well done. I just have a small problem with writing in lower case. God bless!

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