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I absolutely love this. Even though I'm not of the generation of which you speak, I still felt like somehow you had peeked into my brain and read some of my thoughts.
My only critique might be to balance it just a tad more. Maybe change one of the verses to describe the despair that you so eloquently empathized in. Not that the advice and encouragement in the other verses was bad but so super sensitive people won't feel like you are being preachy. I'm having a hard time trying to put it exactly into the right words because it all touched my heart and gave me goosebumps. I just had a vague sense that it was a tad off balance but then I'm not really an expert at poetry.
The rhymes were perfect not one seemed force. Though you start in a sad place you infuse the reader with hope as the poem goes on. It is very lovely indeed and will touch many hearts. god Bless and thank you for this message that I need to be reminded of.