The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/06
Cute - well written and interesting.
What a fun entry. Almost sounds like an editoral column. Are you a columnist? Great messeges weaved between a fun, entertaining read. Great job!
05/13/06
I didn't follow a lot of it... but I DID relate to the chocolate cake! lol! Well written and polished by an obvious pro.
05/13/06
Very well written, exceptionally polished. Someone said that it read like a columnist and I would agree. The writer obviously has well developed skills. Loved the story and the messages ... and I agree about playing golf. I don't play it either! ;-)
I really enjoyed this. I wonder sometimes what God hopes for too.
This was both entertaining and thought provoking. Good writing and message.
The casual commentary style doesn't fool your reader. There's some deep stuff, here. :-)

What does God hope for, anyway? Or....does He hope at all? Why hope if you already KNOW? Hmmmmm.....

I have no patience for golf; chasing a little ball all over the countryside drives me nuts. Funny ending!