The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/15
Masterfully written verse, that I enjoyed beginning to end! The powerful message woven within, the power of God's love contrasted with man's, just visually seeped from the lines. Terrific job!
12/13/15
Fantastic job with the topic!

Profound and deeply engaging piece.

God bless~
12/16/15
This poem exuded zest and energy. Very engaging and a different take on steam. Very creative.
12/17/15
Congratulations on your 2nd place EC award, Dave.

A wonderful way to introduce the two brothers of thunder--James and John. I really enjoyed the poem.
12/31/15
Perfection!