The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/05
Interesting how we learn our lessons when something frightening happens. I am glad your dog didn't die. Will he learn from his near death experience, though?
02/11/05
Powerful lesson!( My dog story pales in comparison!) This is SO analogous to life on earth. Satan IS roaming seeking whom he may devour. We are EXACTLY like your poor disobedient puppy, and if we keep chasing jack rabbits, we will be devoured unless we are saved at the last second and have our wounds bound by the one who owns us. This would be a great teaching story to pre-teens and older!! Very good response to the Challenge word! ~L~