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09/18/08
Very good story. Hunting trips can be to bring home a trophy, or for many other reasons. As long as one enjoys it, the trip is successful. Nicely done.
Bambi & his mom thank you! This was an enjoyable story.
09/20/08
A lot of wisdom here - I liked the last line the best. Good story.
Enjoyed your story - I am an anti-hunter except with a camera, but before everything else you need "eyes to see" (even ruffed grouse) and I think you have that. Happy hunting. And God bless you.
I enjoyed this. Especially the last line and the line where he says he's lucky the animals can't shoot back. Maybe, this hunter doesn't really want to shoot, maybe he just wants to enjoy the peace that only being out in nature can bring.
Great job!