The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/15
I think you should have taken the opportunity to tell him the Bible is the inspired word of God.
11/12/15
So sad and so true a tale this is. You've handled the topic with a sharp dart of truth. Really, I think this is a masterpiece. Great work!
11/13/15
HI Brian, Good job of rhyming, and pace. As sad a place as this world can be, the thought of hell is terrifying. Thanks for sharing this story.