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I enjoyed this. You captured the feel of winter well and I liked your analogy. Well done.
11/25/05
I like winter..so I really don't dread it too much--the sun shines in winter too. I liked your thoughts anyway..looking at a different view. God bless ya, littlelight
11/27/05
The 5th stanza is my favorite. The warmth of His love melts the coldness we have within. Very nice.
11/27/05
Yes, you captured the winter times in our soul when it can be so dark. I love the sun and I loved your phrase, 'I am a Child of the Sun.' He is always there reaching out to us, even when we can't see Him. I LOVED this.