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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Obedience (01/31/05)
Dear heavenly father,
lord of heaven high,
I give my word from my heart,
to follow till I die,

Lord of land of living,
Ruler of the earth,
I will spread your word,
giving all i'm worth,

I will obay your rules set out,
I will not ask you why,
For you are god my father,
in your castle in your sky,

I will obide in all you say,
everything you ask me to,
for you have given love to me,
and watched over in all i do,

obide in god almighty high,
prase thee lord above,
for he created all there is,
with a special touch on love.
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Deborah Porter 
02/16/05
Audrey, I thought this was a really sweet entry, so it was a shame that we did have to disqualify it due to the word count. Our word count limits for entries are 150 minimum and 750 maximum. Your entry came in at just 109 words, so in the future, all you have to do is include an introductory paragraph (other than just adding in a scripture) to make sure you have the word count covered. With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)