The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
Vital message in this beautiful poem.

Lovely job. God bless~
01/29/13
Excellent poetic skills--interesting rhyme, meter is spot on, great imagery.
03/01/13
Another excellent poem Deb and again, a strong message of both warning and encouragement to keep going, keep trusting, keep walking in obedience. Wonderful rhymes and scanning - a great poem. Thankyou