The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
I'm not sure if the main character woke up in her own room or at the home of the woman in the car. Actually I think I do know but I'd like to hope she escaped the abuse. I like how the purple blanket comes in at the end.
11/17/09
YOu have a great voice for your MC here, I loved the child-like flow of the words. Good story!