The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/09
I enjoyed this heartwarming story. Chole was pretty brave. :) It was nice to learn Miss Estelle wasn't a witch after all. :)
10/26/09
Very sweet, almost with a "To Kill a Mockingbird" feel.

I liked your old lady character, but I felt that the pointed black hat was a bit of overkill.

Well done, and a delightful read.