The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
Awwww, this was so sweet and not overly done sweet either.
Nice, nice story!

God works in mysterious ways, his wonders to preform.
What a precious story! All about love and forgiveness. It captures the true meaning of Christmas. Thank you for this.
11/21/08
Only in a rock-solid marriage can the wife welcome her husband home like that and mean it! Nick's romancing his wife had paid off. Let's hope Charley makes good his decision to meet Lisa's emotional needs in the same way.
Really enjoyed this entry. Was wandering how the wife who would not receive her gift would react, and was not disappointed. Loved how you wove this. :)
A delightful story. Congratulations!
This excellent story has so many layers! Congratulations, very well done...
11/28/08
I really enjoyed this story. Both couples hit pretty close to home for me. Loryn's my hero.