The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/08
This is written with a likeness of my heart. The Lord is calling us unto deep, and it is a lonely road. But, it is necessary. I will pursue Him till the end......thank you for running the race with me.
08/29/08
Love the "King James-y" language of this Psalm in rhyme, and your strong rhyme choices.

I wonder if a little bit of work on meter might make it flow more smoothly.

Beautiful message, and a very nice poem.
09/01/08
Excellent poem. Very good rhyming. Shows the faith and patience until the Lord answers and He WILL answer. Nicely done.
Poetry blesses my heart and calms my soul. This one has a bit of greatness. Wonderful.