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Written with obvious passion and depth of research.

I'd suggest that you find a stronger "hook"--people are generally uninspired by definitions. Give them something at the beginning to make them want to read more and more.

Thanks for sharing your heart here!
You understand that the nation has been blinded by one view shoved down the throats. We see it in schools and government. Excellent piece. Nicely done. Thank you.
Politics...very brave of you to approach that subject. It is something that none of us can completely agree upon. The topic and writer's understanding are rather clear, but the approach comes off a bit "preachy." If the intent is to convince, a much longer article would be needed, but it is important to be able (and courageous enough) to share. After all, freedom of speech is still ours to claim.