The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/08
Heehee, cute! I like the twist here with it being the Dad writing the letter to his kids and not the kids writing a letter to their dad. That's a different kind of good.
My only note is I think the word "have" was missing from the last line, am I correct? It read a tad awkwardly-otherwise, nice writing! ^_^
Enjoyed the differnet angle from which youapproached the topic. Your title is fitting and the story touching. Would have like more.
04/17/08
This letter from Daddy Swan is nice--I wonder how the "little swans" would respond.
04/25/08
Great title...totally pulled me in. Beautiful story here.