The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/05
Like a natural conversation, the dialog flows so smoothly. A nice light humerous story.
06/01/05
Neat slice of life story, flows well, love the characters. I should have read the title more carefull and then I wouldn't have been so surprised at the end. Well done.
06/06/05
I enjoyed the writing, but felt it dragged a little and the ending was too confusing because any details of her stealing the cake were ont in the story.
06/06/05
Elsie is a tricky one. :D hehe I needed the smile. Nice piece!