The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/18
Great job on the development of this piece! It was an interesting story with a great spiritual truth.
Your title was a great play on words. It was a while into the story before I realized you and your siblings were dogs. Very creative development.
Clever!
07/09/18
I really enjoyed this! I also didn't realize you were dogs until about half way through. It held my attention as it demonstrated a Biblical truth. Thanks!