The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/17
What a delightful well described story of a diamond in the rough!
And your little tid bit at the end about a ghost was fun.
My folks bought an old farm house without running water, furnace and indoor plumbing.in the mid 50's. I was a teenager and I can relate to all those jobs of fixing up an old house.
No one knows all the hard work when they see the beautiful results. I believe the same when a person is born again and no one knows the hard work God does rehabbing a person.
Great job.
09/08/17
Good job showing the progression of the project, and giving a picture of the before and after effect. I could definitely imagine what the house looks like now and only wish I could see it.

The formatting of the challenge articles changes the look of the articles, so I've taken to putting spaces between the paragraphs to make it a little easier to read.
09/08/17
Fabulous!
Blessings~
09/14/17
I really enjoyed reading your perfectly on topic story. I assume it is true - kudos to your sis' for seeing a "diamond" in the rough!
09/14/17
I am a fan of HGTV, so your story was a fun and interesting read. I wish you could post pictures of the finished rooms.
09/14/17
Don't forget to double-space between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
09/14/17
I liked the opening of the story. It drew me into the story.

Congratulations to your sister for working so hard to find this hidden treasures.

I thought the ending was a little distracting to me because ghosts were not mentioned before

Great job of taking us through the process of flipping a house.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Betty,

Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Division.
09/14/17
Congratulations Betty!
Well done,Blessings~
09/14/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Intermediate category, Betty.