The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/14
Great job! This was a really cute story. I loved the ending. I am such a "romantic" and love stories as such.

God bless YOu~
07/26/14
The beginning was a little slow, but necessary to build up the story line. I love how you depicted the main character in all her insecurities. Gregory is like God. He does not see our blemishes and in a world so beautiful, He wants His beautiful bride...us. Your story hit home for me and I am sure it will touch others' lives as well.
The scene in described nicely.

What is going to take place is unknown.

What is on the paper is a mystery.