The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
Good job - nice details, loved the comment about only accurate information can be included :)
I really enjoyed this. I wish computers now could be programmed to only tell the truth. LOL.
Well-written story. I, too, loved your lines about the bible programming being the only accurate information. Although I fear if the story went on, we might find that the MC gets frustrated with that appears to be a loop in the program that he can't get out of and just chucks the whole expensive thing away! Kudos to you for a very creative story!
Interesting.Well written.