The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/06
This is a wonderful poem! I kinda sat waiting for you to introduce the "river" topic, and I think it fit very well. Most everything was even tempo and ryhme. Great job! Keep up the good work.
09/11/06
I like the analogy of how we are the river flowing from God's hands. Everything about us should flow from his hands. Nice poem.
The fourth stanza was my favorite. You really could have ended it there. But the fifth stanza was very strong as well, so it is a good thing you continued.
Inspiring poetry.