The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1067 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/01/06
You did a great job here! I've never been a smoker, but you wrote so compellingly that I felt Art's cravings right along with him. Thanks for not giving us a "pat" ending, but just enough hope.
03/02/06
:)

You make us feel the struggle, and the beginning of real Hope. Great job!
03/03/06
I like the example of Moses and the wandering for forty years. That is a lifetime. Imagine telling the people almost daily they were going to the "promise land". Good writing.
03/04/06
If the writer's mantra is 'show, not tell', you've reached nirvana.
03/05/06
Very real depiction. Good job.
03/05/06
A well written picture of a struggle so many have. This was the one area my Dad and I used to butt (pun intended) heads about all the time. He finally quit this past summer, cold turkey. My hubby's still working on quitting. I noticed a few punctutation problems (saw some missing commas), but a good entry.