The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/06
I liked the first 3 paragraphs of this very much--I could really picture these Texas scenes. I would have liked your 4th paragraph expanded more, with more of a contrast between Graham and Terrell, and have that be the focus of your story. It faltered toward the end, but the beginning was extremely compelling.