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02/20/06
If you switch your last two paragraphs, the climax of your piece will make more sense. Work a bit on sentence structure, and this will be a nice little Bible study. Good job.
02/21/06
I think your quote in the last paragraph explains exactly how man is to see God. Because we are finite and he is infinite. He is Alpha and Omega to us. He is the beginning and the end. So I agree with the previous reviewer a good Bible study.