The Official Writing Challenge
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This was almost exquisitely poetic in its wording! Your article got a little wordy in places, but the beauty was retained throughout.
You gave an excellent definition of freedom without becoming pedantic.
I liked paragraphs 2, 3, 5, and 7. Your conclusion was well-stated...I could just breathe it in!