The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the second story I'm the first to comment on. A great piece, fun to read, and great descriptions.
I'm glad you conquered your fears, and hope you can press that on to the spiritual world.

God bless,

Kevin
I've never skied - never saw snow until I was in my twenties so this piece really struck a chord with me. Loved your 'voice' that was friendly and conversational and put the reader immediately at ease (we knew we weren't going to get 'preached' at). Yet I suspect there's also a message hidden in there as well. Good writing. Keep it up!
11/25/05
I remember that kind of fear the first time I went rafting. (LOL) Enjoyable reading your friendly story. God bless ya, littlelight
11/26/05
What a loving husband (I'm just thankful my hubby wouldn't take me out there in the first place. I'd need a "snail trail" lol)
11/26/05
Written with wit and charm. Break up the long second paragraph for greater readability. Lots of fun to read this!