The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
Very beautiful!
I like the form you use in your poetry - it needs to be slightly more consistent, but only slightly. For example, I'd write: "With generosity/Do you think/that you would see/Prosperity." Also, I wouldn't write "fellow man" anymore unless you were only writing for men, but that's just my feminist nitpickiness talkin'...
10/19/05
"Fellow man", is fine. Hey, if the Bible does it, why can't you.
All this feminist stuff... Pah! Anyway, what a refreshing poem. Nice one!
10/19/05
If your seeds are grown in the rich soil of the Master's own garden, then the results will be rows and rows of patience, love, kindness, selflessness, joy, and giving. What a wonderful harvest for ones lifelong labors! Thanks for this thought-provoking poem.