The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
i love it :-) but i am still puzzled but what the MC is (as it is written in first person) and what he/she/it is trying to catch :-) maybe the mystery is part of the charm, it can be whatever you imagine. I was thinking of a lizard sitting there waiting for a fly to come by and darting out its tongue to catch it .........
no dnt tell me what it really was i rather like my dream :-)
I loved this story. Moving out of our comfort zone and taking a chance is not as easy as it sounds. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.
01/29/11
Congratulations on your 2nd place. How often we stay in our favorite place waiting for our deepest desires to fall into our laps. Great job.