The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
I really like the mood of this article--sort of ruminating on the state of modern churches. The word "Pastors" beginning several sentences should not have an apostrophe, as it is a plural, not a possessive. And an extra "enter" between paragraphs would be easier on the eyes...

You made some excellent points, and the thought you put into this is very evident.