The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/06
good question to end with.
I like it. Thanks for sharing
08/10/06
A good message here. Watch you tenses - you were mostly in the present tense, then wrote this: 'Just then the phone rang and the hands of the clock reminded her that it is time to go to the hospital.' Keep writing.