The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
Very informative! You could use a different title, such as "The Walk of Faith," or "A Spiritual Bond." ...so you don't use the topic word in the title. Some of your longer sentences could use a few commas. Keep up the good work!
07/29/16
Really enjoyed this piece...well done.

Blessings~
You really covered a lot of material in this article.In some places there are some awkward words that can be worked on. A grammar checker might catch some of them but others will have to be checked by slowly reading each sentence maybe even out loud.

I like how Jesus showed his trust in God by dying for sin even though he had none. This aloud God to let him die in our place. For this concept we can completely trust and obey whatever God wants us to do.

Keep your heart in heaven and your eyes in his word as you write.