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09/20/14
Powerful entry and well written. His grace and love has saved so many in a variety of places as your story so clearly represents.

Good job.

God bless~
09/20/14
I love the phrase: "We come united together as brothers from all walks of life, relinquishing our personal doctrines, our denominational preferences, focusing only on our common ground for this moment in time. We do this in faith for the love of Him who bore our cross." Wow - if Christians would always be united serving the interests of God and others instead of themselves, then maybe Jesus prayer to His Father would find its answer in us when He prayed: "that they all may be one even as we are One."
The thoughts of the message did not come together for me. I don't know if it was because of the transition from paragraph to paragraph or some other reason.

I see the prison setting but I failed to see what happened.
A thrilling ride . . .

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Hugs and prayers, Judi