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09/20/14
Awww. This was so beautiful, and it had a voice of "authenticity" to it.

Well written and well done.

God bless~
09/20/14
Cute story - very believable. It would be interesting to tell the same story from one of the girls perspective as in first person.
A wonderful story well told.
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful . . .

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